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Peom I wrote last year
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~kamijisatsu:iconkamijisatsu: Jan 24, 2006, 3:18:20 PM
It's written simply.

But the simplest poems often have the greatest meanings without too many words to disrupt the emotion.

Very well done.
~bigred74292:iconbigred74292: Jan 27, 2006, 2:45:16 PM
Thanks! It was actually one of the first few poems I ever wrote that I thought was decent.
~Evilarticfox:iconEvilarticfox: Feb 2, 2006, 12:47:30 PM
It's a nice poem...

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~WickedWerewolf13:iconWickedWerewolf13: Feb 2, 2006, 12:52:46 PM
Great Poem... I didn't know you did poetry :D

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~HomicidalHampster:iconHomicidalHampster: Feb 2, 2006, 12:54:09 PM
it's good!!!

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~bigred74292:iconbigred74292: Feb 2, 2006, 12:59:49 PM
well werewolf yeah i do write poetry mostly short poems
and hampster and fox thanks
~jon11172:iconjon11172: Feb 2, 2006, 1:09:06 PM
not bad u kind of have a talent for this:)
~EternityRealm:iconEternityRealm: Feb 12, 2006, 8:19:48 AM
It's one of those short poems that linger on in your mind, which is a good thing, mind you. The only issue I'm having is the one typo. But the phrasing is impeccable ^-^

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"Knowing the song I will sing
'bout the secrets of the sun.
It's in you, not in me.
Though it does not mean a thing to you."
~bigred74292:iconbigred74292: Feb 13, 2006, 3:32:44 PM
thanks i kinda have bad spelling as u know but yeah
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