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Peom I wrote last year

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:iconkamijisatsu:
It's written simply.

But the simplest poems often have the greatest meanings without too many words to disrupt the emotion.

Very well done.
:iconbigred74292:
Thanks! It was actually one of the first few poems I ever wrote that I thought was decent.
:iconevilarticfox:
It's a nice poem...

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:iconwickedwerewolf13:
Great Poem... I didn't know you did poetry :D

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:iconhomicidalhampster:
it's good!!!

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:iconbigred74292:
well werewolf yeah i do write poetry mostly short poems
and hampster and fox thanks
:iconjon11172:
not bad u kind of have a talent for this:)
:iconeternityrealm:
It's one of those short poems that linger on in your mind, which is a good thing, mind you. The only issue I'm having is the one typo. But the phrasing is impeccable ^-^

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thanks i kinda have bad spelling as u know but yeah

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