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As I lay here in the dark
my bed covered in crinsom-red
I begin to see the light
as I lay in my bed
I remember all those times of pain
as I take my last few breaths
then my pain begins to drift away
while I fade away
©2006-2009 ~bigred74292
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Poem I wrote in class

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:iconjon11172:
it sounds pretty good mostly when i hear poems i usually hear lots of backgrounds which that just makes it better with the poem.
:iconbigred74292:
thanks! okay what do u mean by backgrounds?
:iconjon11172:
like if someone puts it like this i see somthing bad something real bad the seas are moving back and forth recklessly that means that theres a bad storm coming through
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Fantastic work :D

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And I believe this may call for a proper introduction, and well
Don't you see, I'm the narrator, and this is just the prologue?
Panic! at the Disco

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February 3, 2006
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